| Author |
Message |
ssimonss
Joined: 31 Mar 2009
Posts: 64
Location: Dublin
|
 Posted:
Sat May 02, 2009 4:42 pm |
  |
Well, not mine exactly. I make it with my mate Matthew. He writes and I draw.
www.muddledcomic.com
Why jump into the overcrowded world of webcomics? Hopes of being a millionaire t-shirt salesman? Partially. Also because I'm unemployed and bored.
I figure there's probably one or two webcomic fans floating around here, so check it out if ya like. Updates Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
[edit]
The websites a bit glitchy at the moment (early days and whatnot). Should be grand if youre looking at it on firefox or safari though. |
_________________
Oh me, Oh my, I'm all Muddled |
|
   |
|
beautiful_chaos
Joined: 13 May 2007
Posts: 1285
Location: in transit
|
| Posted:
Sat May 02, 2009 5:37 pm |
|
i like the art! not sure how i feel about the comic in general, though. will check it out better when i've actually slept.
so good job you. you did the stuff i liked. |
_________________
Open Your Eyes |
|
 |
|
goatboner
Joined: 31 Mar 2009
Posts: 703
|
| Posted:
Sat May 02, 2009 5:52 pm |
|
this is actually pretty ok
i think the latest comic would be funnier if the last panel didn't have dialogue tho |
_________________
| Miles wrote: |
| this looks like an ordinary pen but if you twist it *like so* u can troll homos & dds n00bs to oblivion |
Last edited by goatboner on Sat May 02, 2009 6:04 pm; edited 2 times in total |
|
|
|
the saturday option
Joined: 25 Jul 2008
Posts: 6011
|
| Posted:
Sat May 02, 2009 5:59 pm |
|
|
|
|
Fermatprime
Joined: 27 Mar 2009
Posts: 155
|
| Posted:
Sun May 03, 2009 1:11 am |
|
I like the art style, it's nice to see comics that aren't ripping off either xkcd or Penny Arcade. The writing still seems a bit... generic. I'll probably keep reading though, since it's not like I have anything better to do. |
_________________
The Charles Bukowski of Internet trolls? |
|
|
|
ashlyontheeveofthejourney
Joined: 03 May 2009
Posts: 11
Location: Sydney, Australia
|
| Posted:
Sun May 03, 2009 5:20 am |
|
|
|
|
ssimonss
Joined: 31 Mar 2009
Posts: 64
Location: Dublin
|
| Posted:
Sun May 03, 2009 10:16 am |
|
Thanks for the critiques guys!
It's odd to finally get some. We were paranoid about missing updates when we decided to make this thing, so went a bit overboard and did a poop load of comics before we went live. Gave us a comfortable buffer to work from.
At the same time, we can take on board advice, but you probably wont see it taken onboard until about 50 comics in, ha.
Having said that, the swearing does drop a significant amount five comics from now. The writing is pretty much the same style, but gets more honed.
We had a strange option to go back and streamline the early comics after we had our buffer made, but I guess we wanted to show what we'd done, scabs, cuts and bruises included.
Feels good to have it out there though! |
_________________
Oh me, Oh my, I'm all Muddled |
|
|
|
|
|
